Feedback from First Contents Page Draft

I also got feedback from the same groups of people about my contents page draft.

The first feedback I got was from two media teachers in my college.

From this feedback, I can see that there are many things that I need to add to this page as well as just finishing it. The first thing I will change is the banner at the top of the page. I will add the magazine masthead to it to continue the house style of my magazine. I will also add the issue number and date to the banner. Another part of this page I will page is that I will flip the far right picture so that it is facing the page and not away from the page. One major thing I will add contacts of the magazine. For example, a subscription box, social media and a web address.

I then also got feedback from my target audience. This is what they said:

This feedback also shows that there are some things I need to change about my contents page. I need to add a page number to the page. I also need to make all the lines on the page the same colour to make it look neater and give it a stronger house style. One member of my target audience raised the interesting point that the main article image should be the biggest. Because of this, will need to change some of my layout to fit around the new size that my main article image will be. I will also change the typeface of the page's heading because it does't quite fit the page and doesn't have the right house style.